Greetings my friend, I'd like to advise you to fix some typos that reoccur in the game. While there is no problem with the grammar in general, "his/her" and "him/her" get mixed up pretty often. For example, when the protagonsit encounters Nanami for the first time and Yuki gets frustrated: "She felt that Misaki's mind was no longer on the ride or on her, so she had to do something to get her attention again ..."
Sorry if I mess up the grammar myself, English is not my native language, and I do not respect it.
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Greetings my friend, I'd like to advise you to fix some typos that reoccur in the game. While there is no problem with the grammar in general, "his/her" and "him/her" get mixed up pretty often. For example, when the protagonsit encounters Nanami for the first time and Yuki gets frustrated: "She felt that Misaki's mind was no longer on the ride or on her, so she had to do something to get her attention again ..."
Sorry if I mess up the grammar myself, English is not my native language, and I do not respect it.
Choice "I don't know". (Haruka's invite)
"The negative thought engulfed him for a good while."
...and then time stopped forever.
Hi, Thank you very much for playing and commenting.
In the new version there is no longer this problem after the election.
Thanks and Regards.