Update 1.2


Dear players

After an analysis and review of the comments you have left me on the page, I have decided to rethink sectors of the plot where there was netorare content, being a novel that contains drama my intention was to show the consequences of these acts, but after your comments and the advice of a colleague, I decided to make these modifications so that the game was not unpleasant, or cause bad feeling in the players, since that was never the intention. After all, the plot follows the same main thread, but certain secondary acts were modified, eliminating any vestige of netorare content. 

Also, with the intention of uploading the game to Steam and not having any inconvenience with their policies, I have changed Shota's character design. Since this game is for adults and has erotic content, it may cause conflict with a minor character, although this character does not have erotic scenes. 

I am sorry to have caused inconvenience and I hope you can enjoy the game. 

I thank those who left me their comments and made me see how to deliver a more enjoyable game for the players who have shown interest in my work. 

For those who have already played I leave below the detailed changes I have made. I warn that there are important spoilers.

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Spoiler. 

The couples are kept in the same thread, with the exception of Kaoru and Michael. 

After arriving at the hotel, Michael sees Kaoru kissing one of the servants. And after she expresses her desire to have a harem, he rejects that idea by alluding that he cannot share her with other men and women. To which Kaoru tries to make him understand that they could both enjoy having an open relationship. Michael comments to her that he is shocked at her distorted idea of their relationship, and Michael angrily decides to leave her alone in the bedroom.  All the erotic scenes in the hotel have been removed. 

Michael sleeps in another room of the hotel. And he has a brief monologue about how lonely he is starting to feel and that this was something he deserved for his past sins. 

After leaving the hotel, Kaoru asks Michael if he is still mad at her and she apologizes just to please him, but he realizes she is insensitive and doesn't appreciate him properly, to which he gives her a sharp command.  

The couple Naofumi and Kim. 

I have eliminated the erotic scene as they are antagonists to the plot. 

Shota's conflict and the change of the character design.

I have adjusted Natsumi's thoughts about Shota. He is still a vampire that she sees as a younger brother, but all comments referring to him have been changed from "child" to "Young man". Shota was also turned by Natsumi sixteen years ago, hinting that when Sho died, Shota was already a vampire. 

Thank you and sorry for any inconvenience.

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Just because characters arent the MC or LI doesn't mean they shouldn't have sex scenes. Its actually alot more interesting when the antagonist and other characters are able to get in on the action. Its clear this project has no future since you are willing to change your vision over a few soyboys whining. Good Luck.

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Hello, thank you very much for your comments. 

I understand your position, but let me tell you that I haven't changed the central plot, but I have moved Michael and Kaoru's conflict forward, and I eliminated the scene so that it wouldn't cause discomfort since I indicated from the beginning in the comments and tags that this story wouldn't have netorare. Since Kim leaves with another without saying anything to Aoi and Yuri, that also happens to be an infidelity to which I did not want to give focus, but it is understood that it happens. 

Regarding the erotic scene of the antagonists, I will keep it in mind for my future projects, since it is precisely a dilemma that I was thinking about. 

I'm still new at this, “In the dark” is my second project and I'm polishing my method and focus, that's why I value every comment since it's the only way to get feedback and learn.

regards. 

I appreciate your response and Im glad you didnt take the comment personally. But I just wanna say the character who was fantasizing about the orgy is not an LI correct? If thats the case its not NTR and its not even cheating for that matter because it doesnt even actually happen, But my main question to you is dont you want to do something fresh and unique with unexpected twists and turns? To me thats what makes an interesting story. Many of these characters are supposed to be vampires and vampires are savagely violent and very sexual in every movie and story they are in. Right now this is kind of looking like an amateur version of twilight its the same old human and vampire fall in love. My favorite part was the dynamic between the Female MC and the bad guy because they're rivalry/conflict has the potential to be very interesting. Im not saying there has to be a sex scene between them( although that would be interesting) but if he was able to bite her for example and get some of her powers and become the ultimate enemy that would make the story way more interesting as well as give the characters a strong motivation to eliminate him. And it would make the final Showdown between the 2 MC's and him to be way more crucial and more emotionally investing. Thats just my thoughts on it. Either way good luck with it. 

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Finally the MC has a back bone glad that shit is gone since they serve zero purpose i am intrested in seeing where this is headed bro.